Final corrections to edxl-cap1.2-au-v1 0-wd04 Feb 8.docx uploaded on Feb

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Elysa,

I have completed a review of the CAP-AU document you posted on Feb 11.

The following changes still need to be corrected:

1) WD03 still appears in the footer of pages 1-7 and pages 33-37

2) Footer in the landscaped section of the document correctly shows WD04 but the date on the right side is corrupted and is displayed as “8 December February 2012” when the revision tracking is selected to ‘final’

3) Page 9 – <msgType> Example A – three space characters need to be inserted in front of the <sender> line to make it indented the same as <scope>

4) Page 27 - <parameter> Note 2) should read as follows to agree with the changes proposed by Jacob and reflected in Comment ID 46: 2) It is recommend that alert message producers indicate when an update message contains non-substantive content changes in order to support advanced distribution decisions associated with reducing the number of cases of over-alerting

5) Page 27 - <parameter> Note 3) should read as follows to agree with the changes proposed by Jacob and reflected in Comment ID 47: 3) When an alert message is considered a minor update, all <info> elements MAY contain a “MinorChange” parameter value(s) with an appropriate value setting that details the extent of the minor change:

<valueName>urn:oasis:names:tc:emergency:cap

:1.2:profile:CAP-AU:1.0:MinorChange</valueName>

Greg Trott

CAP-AU Project Manager

Australian Government Attorney-General's Department

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Subject: [emergency-cap-profiles] Groups - edxl-cap1.2-au-v1 0-wd04 Feb 8.docx uploaded

Submitter's message
This WD04 of the CAP-AU profile is posted for your review. All issues noted on the 2/8 issues list are reflected in this redline version of the document.

Please review to make sure all corrections are properly made. This document will be zipped and provided to the TC for consideration and vote for CSD and PRD02 2/14 as recommended during our 2/8 SC meeting.

Cheers,

-- Elysa Jones

Document Name: edxl-cap1.2-au-v1 0-wd04 Feb 8.docx

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WD04 Red-Line containing all corrections identified in the 2/8 issues list.
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Submitter: Elysa Jones
Group: EM CAP Profiles SC
Folder: Contributions
Date submitted: 2012-02-11 09:34:30

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