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Subject: RE: Final corrections to edxl-cap1.2-au-v1 0-wd04 Feb 8.docx uploaded on Feb 11th [SEC=UNCLASSIFIED]
Hi Greg, These corrections as well as a few more that Werner caught (mostly footer and two camel case corrections for element names) have been made in the WD04 posted 2/14 for vote in the TC today. In you #4 below, I added “ed” to recommend for it to read better but did not capitalize the word here as we have done in another case. Let me know if you want me to do that. Cheers, Elysa From: Trott, Gregory [mailto:Gregory.Trott@ag.gov.au] UNCLASSIFIED Elysa, I have completed a review of the CAP-AU document you posted on Feb 11. The following changes still need to be corrected: 1) WD03 still appears in the footer of pages 1-7 and pages 33-37 2) Footer in the landscaped section of the document correctly shows WD04 but the date on the right side is corrupted and is displayed as “8 December February 2012” when the revision tracking is selected to ‘final’ 3) Page 9 – <msgType> Example A – three space characters need to be inserted in front of the <sender> line to make it indented the same as <scope> 4) Page 27 - <parameter> Note 2) should read as follows to agree with the changes proposed by Jacob and reflected in Comment ID 46: 2) It is recommend that alert message producers indicate when an update message contains non-substantive content changes in order to support advanced distribution decisions associated with reducing the number of cases of over-alerting 5) Page 27 - <parameter> Note 3) should read as follows to agree with the changes proposed by Jacob and reflected in Comment ID 47: 3) When an alert message is considered a minor update, all <info> elements MAY contain a “MinorChange” parameter value(s) with an appropriate value setting that details the extent of the minor change: <valueName>urn:oasis:names:tc:emergency:cap :1.2:profile:CAP-AU:1.0:MinorChange</valueName> Greg Trott CAP-AU Project Manager Australian Government Attorney-General's Department From: emergency-cap-profiles@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:emergency-cap-profiles@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Elysa Jones Submitter's message
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