Rex
In wd04
Line 352 – the word ”an” should be “the”
Line 353 – should be… (i.e. a “wind” event leading to a “wind” alert)
Line 367 – missing the word “all”, should be…all associated to a “tropical storm” event.
Line 368 – two spaces at the end of the line
Line 369 – two spaces after… However
Line 369 – should be… “smoke” event
Line 403 – missing comma after the word “both”
Line 404 – The word Practices should start a new paragraph
An extra entry in Appendix B... OET-144 Heavy Rain
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Not sure how that got inserted in there. Its not even alphabetical so something seems wrong.
Norm Paulsen
Data Architecture and Standards | Architecture des données et des normes
Forecast Systems Integration & Innovation
| Intégration et innovation du système de prévisions
Meteorological Service of Canada | Service météorologique du Canada
ECCC
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Email:
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