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Subject: RE: [emergency-rim] Groups - Statement of Work Draft (EDXL-RIM-Statement-of-Work-v 01.doc) uploaded

It looks good, but I would like to suggest a couple of changes:

The bullet, "an XML Schema for common terminology definitions and datatype",
should become two separate bullets:

- Common terminology definitions
- XML schemas for common datatypes

(I prefer the plural in this case because it's not yet known whether the SC
will be developing a single schema containing all the relevant type
definitions or a set of schemas, and also because people often don't agree
on what the singular form, "schema", really means.)

The bullet, "reference to a common data dictionary" is unclear to me.  Do
you mean that the SC will identify a pre-existing data dictionary and will
specify how to reference it, or do you mean that the SC will develop
(populate) a common data dictionary that will be referenceable from other
standards?  I think you mean the latter, in which case the bullet could

- A common data dictionary and governance for usage, change, and reference

However, then I am wondering if this bullet should be merged with the first
one above (Common terminology definitions).

Lastly, I would move the dictionary bullet to the top of the list, and the
XML schemas bullet to the bottom of the list (most abstract to least
abstract order). 



> -----Original Message-----
> From: ltincher@evotecinc.com [mailto:ltincher@evotecinc.com] 
> Sent: Thursday, May 08, 2008 17:33
> To: emergency-rim@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: [emergency-rim] Groups - Statement of Work Draft 
> (EDXL-RIM-Statement-of-Work-v 01.doc) uploaded
> The document named Statement of Work Draft 
> (EDXL-RIM-Statement-of-Work-v
> 01.doc) has been submitted by Lee Tincher to the EM Reference 
> Information Model SC document repository.
> Document Description:
> This is just a rough draft to "shoot at" largely based on 
> Rex's Statement of Purpose and notes from our last meeting.
> View Document Details:
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/emergency-rim/doc
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