Re: [emergency] overview document for EDXL: review requested

[Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>]

I applaud the effort, Robin,

I hesitate to offer a recent presentation a collaboration with which 
I was associated for this until I have checked it with the other 
participants, but it was made at the exposition/trade show segment of 
the recent SWANS Conference. I should be able to send it to you in 
the next couple of days.

I didn't find any significant errors or items with which I would 
actually quibble over, though I also don't have all the facts myself, 
or at least to hand for fact checking, but it certainly captures the 
efforts in great part. Well done, as usual.

Regards,
Rex

At 7:14 PM -0400 5/24/05, Robin Cover wrote:
>Over the weekend I made a couple editing passes over the
>CAP v1.1 public release article [1], trying to improve
>its content/accuracy based upon reviewer feedback.
>
>Because the information about EDXL started to outweigh
>cribbed text describing CAP v1.1, I created a separate
>document dedicated to EDXL [2].
>
>If anyone has critical comment about the draft document
>on EDXL, or URLs for key resources that have escaped my
>notice, please send email. Also, if any of you has
>presentation materials (e.g., from conferences)
>or descriptive prose (e.g., pre-print articles) that
>would fill in any gaps or provide additional overview
>from the OASIS perspective, please forward the
>document(s).
>
>At your service,
>
>Robin Cover
>OASIS
>XML Cover Pages
>
>[1] http://xml.coverpages.org/ni2005-05-19-a.html
>   
>     "OASIS Advances Common Alerting Protocol and
>     Emergency Data Exchange Language"
>
>[2] http://xml.coverpages.org/edxl.html
>
>     "Emergency Data Exchange Language (EDXL)"
>
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