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Subject: Re: [emergency] NOAA Letter and meeting today a 3:00 EDT
Thanks Elysa, I am available today for the call. I think the first paragraph is a bit disjointed. I think the second sentence should not be one long sentence, but two shorter ones. Also the last sentence does not seem to belong with the paragraph's overall thought and sounds like something I would expect the addressee (along with whomever else we are addressing by implication) to know. I think it should be a separate short paragraph. I suggest: I am writing on behalf of the Emergency Management Technical Committee (EMTC) of the Organization for the Advancement of Structured Information Standards (OASIS). We would like to commend your staff for utilizing the Common Alerting Protocol (CAP) as the basis for the HazCollect system, an NWS initiative in partnership with the Federal Emergency Management Agency. We also want to address an anticipated far reaching problem with the system in its current form. As you may know, HazCollect enables federal, state and local emergency managers to automatically forward Non-Weather Emergency Messages into the NOAA All-Hazard Radio network and other NOAA public dissemination systems. I would also break the current second paragraph into at least two paragraphs, breaking with the sentence that starts: "Deviation...." Regards, Rex At 10:46 AM -0500 6/16/06, Elysa Jones wrote: >TC Members, > >Patti and I have worked on the NOAA letter which >is attached. Please review as soon as possible. >I would like to have a telecon to accept any >final comments and approve the letter with a >quorum this afternoon if possible. Please try >to be available for a very short call at >3:00EDT. Reply to the list if can make this. >Thank you, Elysa > >Attachment converted: Macintosh >HD:Lautenbacher_draft_TC1.doc (WDBN/«IC») >(001451A6) >--------------------------------------------------------------------- >To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that >generates this mail. You may a link to this group and all your TCs in OASIS >at: >https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php -- Rex Brooks President, CEO Starbourne Communications Design GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison Berkeley, CA 94702 Tel: 510-849-2309
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