Re: [entity-resolution] draft blurb for the vote [was: minutes frommeeting 20050823]

[Lauren Wood <Lauren.Wood@Sun.COM>]

I'll incorporate this into the next version. Can people have any other 
changes to me by Monday?

thanks,

Lauren

Jirka Kosek wrote:
> Lauren Wood wrote:
> 
>> Next version, to get rid of the split infinitive I added... any more 
>> comments?
> 
> 
> That reminds me, that I should look into some grammar book what that 
> split infinitive is ;)
> 
>>    2. External identifiers may require protocols that are not 
>> accessible to all of the tools on a single computer system. An 
>> external identifier that is addressed with the ftp: protocol, for 
>> example, is not accessible 
> 
> 
> I would prefer "FTP protocol", as "ftp:" is technically just name of URL 
> scheme.
> 
> Otherwise excellent work, thanks!
> 
>                     Jirka