RE: [ffm] TC Administration comments on FFMII V1.0 csprd02

["Nguyenphu, Thinh (NSN - US/Irving)" <thinh.nguyenphu@nsn.com>]

Hi Chet,

Most of your comments were implemented by Paul's version (WD04), which
FFM-TC approved on Monday, September 10.  However, some your comments
were not part of Paul version.

I will issue a new version (WD05) to include the following changes:

1) added the links to the url (item#1)
2) fix all of private links to public links.
3) update the acknowledge list.

Per Robin email, item #2 will not be implemented.

Thanks
Thinh


-----Original Message-----
From: ffm@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:ffm@lists.oasis-open.org] On
Behalf Of ext Chet Ensign
Sent: Tuesday, September 11, 2012 1:30 PM
To: ffm@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [ffm] TC Administration comments on FFMII V1.0 csprd02

Members of the FFM TC, 

I apparently neglected to write up these observations and send them to
you during your last public review. I am sending them now so that they
can be of use to you as work on your next iteration of the
specification. These are non-material changes so making them will not
require another round of public reviews. 

1. Several normative references are displayed as http urls but they are
not linked:

[ISO-639]  ISO 639-1:2002, Part 1: Alpha-2 Codes, "Codes for the
representation of names of languages",
http://www.iso.org/iso/iso_catalogue/catalogue_tc/catalogue_detail.htm?c
snumber=22109

[Schema2]  P. V. Biron et al. XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes. World Wide
Web Consortium Recommendation, May 2001. See
http://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-2/

[SOAP]  SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging Framework (Second Edition),
Martin Gudgin, Marc Hadley, Noah Mendelsohn, Jean-Jacques Moreau, Henrik
Frystyk Nielsen, Anish Karmarkar, Yves Lafon, Editors. World Wide Web
Consortium, 27 April 2007. This version is
http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-soap12-part1-20070427. The latest version
is available at http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part1/.

[WSS]  Web Services Security: SOAP Message Security 1.1. 1 February
2006. OASIS Standard Specification.
http://docs.oasis-open.org/wss/v1.1/wss-v1.1-spec-os-SOAPMessageSecurity
.pdf

[WSS-UTP]   Web Services Security: Username Token Profile 1.1. 1
February 2006. OASIS Standard Specification.
http://docs.oasis-open.org/wss/v1.1/wss-v1.1-spec-os-UsernameTokenProfil
e.pdf


2. The wsdl and schema filenames use the underscore (_) character. We
disallow that character in names except in the case where they are
generated by machine. Robin can give you extensive background on the
problems the character causes in systems. 

If the files are not machine generated, I would appreciate it if you
would replace the underscores with hyphens (-). 


3. Please note any namespaces declared in the wsdl or schemas on the
next iteration of the specification. We will add the declared namespaces
to the cover page of the spec and create a namespace document to
accompany the spec. 


4. There are several links in the spec that point to documents in Kavi
but that use the internal link. These will not work for public readers.
I believe this is the whole list: 

2.2 Non-Normative References
[FFMII-REQ] Field Force Management Integration Interface Requirements,
Version 1.0, OASIS FFM TC, September 12, 2011,
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/download.php/43512/late
st

And in Appendix B

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/email/archives/201202/m
sg00021.html

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/email/archives/201204/m
sg00018.html

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/email/archives/201204/m
sg00021.html

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/email/archives/201204/m
sg00024.html

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/email/archives/201204/m
sg00046.html

These can be fixed by replacing the string ...
apps/org/workgroup/ffm/...
with .../committees/. So, for example, changing 

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/download.php/43512/late
st 

to 

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/43512/latest

will make it available publicly. 

Thanks and let me know if you have any questions on any of these. 

/chet 
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Chet Ensign
Director of Standards Development and TC Administration 
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society
http://www.oasis-open.org

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