Re: [ffm] TC Administration comments on FFMII V1.0 csprd02

[Chet Ensign <chet.ensign@oasis-open.org>]

Ok, that sounds good Thinh. Please also keep a log of the changes made
- you'll need that for the approval.

/chet

On Wed, Sep 12, 2012 at 1:35 PM, Nguyenphu, Thinh (NSN - US/Irving)
<thinh.nguyenphu@nsn.com> wrote:
> Hi Chet,
>
> Most of your comments were implemented by Paul's version (WD04), which
> FFM-TC approved on Monday, September 10.  However, some your comments
> were not part of Paul version.
>
> I will issue a new version (WD05) to include the following changes:
>
> 1) added the links to the url (item#1)
> 2) fix all of private links to public links.
> 3) update the acknowledge list.
>
> Per Robin email, item #2 will not be implemented.
>
> Thanks
> Thinh
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: ffm@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:ffm@lists.oasis-open.org] On
> Behalf Of ext Chet Ensign
> Sent: Tuesday, September 11, 2012 1:30 PM
> To: ffm@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: [ffm] TC Administration comments on FFMII V1.0 csprd02
>
> Members of the FFM TC,
>
> I apparently neglected to write up these observations and send them to
> you during your last public review. I am sending them now so that they
> can be of use to you as work on your next iteration of the
> specification. These are non-material changes so making them will not
> require another round of public reviews.
>
> 1. Several normative references are displayed as http urls but they are
> not linked:
>
> [ISO-639]  ISO 639-1:2002, Part 1: Alpha-2 Codes, "Codes for the
> representation of names of languages",
> http://www.iso.org/iso/iso_catalogue/catalogue_tc/catalogue_detail.htm?c
> snumber=22109
>
> [Schema2]  P. V. Biron et al. XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes. World Wide
> Web Consortium Recommendation, May 2001. See
> http://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-2/
>
> [SOAP]  SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging Framework (Second Edition),
> Martin Gudgin, Marc Hadley, Noah Mendelsohn, Jean-Jacques Moreau, Henrik
> Frystyk Nielsen, Anish Karmarkar, Yves Lafon, Editors. World Wide Web
> Consortium, 27 April 2007. This version is
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-soap12-part1-20070427. The latest version
> is available at http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part1/.
>
> [WSS]  Web Services Security: SOAP Message Security 1.1. 1 February
> 2006. OASIS Standard Specification.
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/wss/v1.1/wss-v1.1-spec-os-SOAPMessageSecurity
> .pdf
>
> [WSS-UTP]   Web Services Security: Username Token Profile 1.1. 1
> February 2006. OASIS Standard Specification.
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/wss/v1.1/wss-v1.1-spec-os-UsernameTokenProfil
> e.pdf
>
>
> 2. The wsdl and schema filenames use the underscore (_) character. We
> disallow that character in names except in the case where they are
> generated by machine. Robin can give you extensive background on the
> problems the character causes in systems.
>
> If the files are not machine generated, I would appreciate it if you
> would replace the underscores with hyphens (-).
>
>
> 3. Please note any namespaces declared in the wsdl or schemas on the
> next iteration of the specification. We will add the declared namespaces
> to the cover page of the spec and create a namespace document to
> accompany the spec.
>
>
> 4. There are several links in the spec that point to documents in Kavi
> but that use the internal link. These will not work for public readers.
> I believe this is the whole list:
>
> 2.2 Non-Normative References
> [FFMII-REQ] Field Force Management Integration Interface Requirements,
> Version 1.0, OASIS FFM TC, September 12, 2011,
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/download.php/43512/late
> st
>
> And in Appendix B
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/email/archives/201202/m
> sg00021.html
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/email/archives/201204/m
> sg00018.html
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/email/archives/201204/m
> sg00021.html
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/email/archives/201204/m
> sg00024.html
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/email/archives/201204/m
> sg00046.html
>
> These can be fixed by replacing the string ...
> apps/org/workgroup/ffm/...
> with .../committees/. So, for example, changing
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ffm/download.php/43512/late
> st
>
> to
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/43512/latest
>
> will make it available publicly.
>
> Thanks and let me know if you have any questions on any of these.
>
> /chet
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