Minor editorial comments on OAXAL Reference Model

["Considine, Toby (Campus Services IT)" <Toby.Considine@unc.edu>]

Minor editing comments only:

 

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The names "OASIS", [insert specific trademarked names, abbreviations, etc. here] are trademarks

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1.3 Random use of larger fonts

 

2.1 SCS inconsistently bolded

 

 

The commenter is a member of the OASIS Technical Advisory Board (TAB)

 

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"It is the theory that decides what can be observed."   - Albert Einstein

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Toby Considine Chair, OASIS oBIX Technical Committee Co-Chair, OASIS Technical Advisory Board Facilities Technology Office University of North Carolina Chapel Hill, NC

Email: Toby.Considine@ unc.edu Phone: (919)962-9073 http://www.oasis-open.org blog: www.NewDaedalus.com