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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (OBIX-198) Multiple locations, the use of the word "Concept" in this specification is nearly always in muddled expressions of intent
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Craig Gemmill commented on OBIX-198:
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A search through the document shows a number of other places where the word concept is used, but I do not think there is a problem with their usage.
> Multiple locations, the use of the word "Concept" in this specification is nearly always in muddled expressions of intent
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> Key: OBIX-198
> URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/OBIX-198
> Project: OASIS Open Building Information Exchange (oBIX) TC
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: OBIX 1.1 Specification
> Affects Versions: OBIX 1.1 PR02
> Environment: Toby Considine
> Reporter: Toby Considine
> Assignee: Craig Gemmill
>
> Suggest searching for all occurrences and considering re-write for each. Instances of note include:
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> Section 4.1.1 Line 317: "Supports the concept of Null is awkward. Suggest "Any OBIX Objects may have the property Null."
> Section 4.2: This Concept is... Suggest: "In object-oriented terms, the base OBIX Val Object is an abstract class, and the Val subtypes are concrete classes that inherit from that abstract class.
> Line 1700: This is the normative definition of Point. Delete "The concept of"
> Line 1703-1704: "The Goal" language is distracting. Suggest:
> OBIX allows an integrator to normalize the representation of Points without forcing an impedance mismatch on implementers...
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