Re: [office-comment] Re: The third para in 4.4 of ODF 1.0

[Patrick Durusau <patrick@durusau.net>]

Mokoto,

MURATA Makoto (FAMILY Given) wrote:
> Patrick,
>
> Sorry for my abrupt mail.  Yes, I was talking about 
> the sentence "In addition to Sections can contain regular 
> text content or the text can be contained in another file 
> and linked to the section".  I do not understand what is the 
> subject of this sentence.
>
> Is is ok if we simply omit "In addition"?
>
>   
Sure, that clarifies it as well but my personal preference (subject to 
the TC's approval) would be to re-cast as I suggested earlier.

Oh, but from a translation perspective, I suppose the least change 
possible is the best change possible. Yes?

Hope you are having a great day!

Patriick
> Cheers,
>
>   

-- 
Patrick Durusau
patrick@durusau.net
Chair, V1 - US TAG to JTC 1/SC 34
Convener, JTC 1/SC 34/WG 3 (Topic Maps)
Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300
Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps)