Hi OpenDocument Format team,
Please consider these comments for your second public review. I submitted several of these for the first review [1], but they were not addressed in the comment resolution log [2].
General:
- Some Normative References appear to be outdated. Marina Latini also noted something similar [3].
- Many Normative References do not have active hyperlinks, even when a URL is shown as text. OASIS TC Administration recommends using active links.
- When the Parts were renumbered for Version 1.3, some references to the part numbers were not updated (apparently). See specific examples for Part 2 and Part 3 below.
Part 2: Packages
- In Section 1.5, the first line mentions "part 3", but it apparently should be "Part 2", the current Part. "part 3" also appears in the title of Table 1.
- The hyperlink to [ZIP] in Appendix C of Part 2 [4] is broken in the XHTML version, since it is rendered as "
https://docs.oasis-open.org/office/OpenDocument/v1.3/csprd02/part2-packages/available%20at%20http://www.pkware.com/support/application-note-archives". In this case, the link (in Normative References) is also outdated, and should be either
https://www.pkware.com/documents/APPNOTE/APPNOTE-6.2.0.txt or maybe link to the page where PKWARE specifically calls out the use of ZIP in the Office Open XML File Formats, at
https://support.pkware.com/display/PKZIP/Application+Note+Archives.
Part 3: Schema
- In Section 1.5, Table 6, there is a reference to "Part2" which is probably intended to be "Part 4".
- Section 1.5 mentions "Tables 1-4", but there are six following tables, and the text appears to refer to all six.
- There are two broken links noted in the text:
-- the Non-normative reference to [BibTeXing] is not correct (site reports the document has been removed)
-- the text link in Appendix D.4 to ODF accessibility guidelines is broken/incomplete. A correct link is
https://docs.oasis-open.org/office/office-accessibility/v1.0/ODF_Accessibility_Guidelines-v1.0.html.
[1]
https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office-comment/201909/msg00002.html[2]
https://docs.oasis-open.org/office/OpenDocument/v1.3/csprd01/OpenDocument-v1.3-csprd01-comment-resolution-log.txt[3]
https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office/201911/msg00016.html[4] link to Appendix C of Part 2:
https://docs.oasis-open.org/office/OpenDocument/v1.3/csprd02/part2-packages/OpenDocument-v1.3-csprd02-part2-packages.html#__RefHeading__752917_826425813Best regards,
Paul