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Subject: 1.1 Introduction
Greetings, A couple of comments on 1.1 Introduction in version 17 of the draft: 1.1 Introduction first paragraph, second sentence reads: The schema is suitable for office documents, including text documents, spreadsheets, charts and graphical documents like drawings or presentations, but is not restricted to these *kind* of documents. Error: number agreement Suggest: ... but is not restricted to these kinds of documents. second paragraph reads: The schema retains high-level information suitable for editing document and is friendly to transformations using XSLT or similar XML-based languages or tools. Comment: 'The schema retains'?, seems awkward, along with 'suitable for editing document', which is true but it also supports creation of documents as well. Note number error with 'document.' Suggest: The schema defines suitable XML structures for office documents and is friendly to transformations using XSLT or similar XML-based tools. Hope everyone is having a great day! Patrick -- Patrick Durusau Director of Research and Development Society of Biblical Literature Patrick.Durusau@sbl-site.org Chair, V1 - Text Processing: Office and Publishing Systems Interface Co-Editor, ISO 13250, Topic Maps -- Reference Model Topic Maps: Human, not artificial, intelligence at work!
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