Re: [office] 2.3.1 Text Documents

[Michael Brauer - Sun Germany - ham02 - Hamburg <michael.brauer@sun.com>]

Patrick,

Patrick Durusau wrote:
> Greetings,
> 
> The last two sentences of the first paragraph read:
> 
> Additionally, a text document may contain forms, change tracking 
> information and variable declarations. Each of these are contained in a 
> container element in the document prelude, and may be referenced from 
> the document content.
> 
> Comment: The multiple uses of 'contain' and 'container' is confusing.
> 
> Suggest:
> 
> Additionally, a text document may contain forms, change tracking 
> information and variable declarations. Each of these is defined in the 
> document prelude, and may be referenced from the document content.

Sound better. Changed to yur suggestion..


Thanks

Michael