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Subject: Re: [office] ODF_1.0_Errata_draft_3 - Stage 1 Review
Hi, On 09/18/08 02:29, Dennis E. Hamilton wrote: > Hi Patrick, > > I am reviewing the new errata draft in stages: > Thank you very much for this effort. > SECTION AND LINE NUMBER DISCREPANCIES IN ERRATA DRAFT 3 > > ODF 1.0 IS 26300 > Section page line page line > > 9.3.11 311 24 315 15 [new insertion] > The effect of the instruction is to change > "a URI" to "an URI" in ODF 1.0 and "a IRI" > to "an IRI" in IS 26300. Unfortunately, > "URI" is a plural term in accordance with > [RFC2396] and, if used in singular, it would > be "a URI" just as it is "a URL." That's > because it is either you-are-eye or Universal > Resource Mumble, and either way we have the > 'except when pronounced as "Y"' exception to U > being a vowel, even though in speech we might say > "an earl." Since I am not a native English speaker, I have really no opinion here. > > > 15.4.7 *555**41* 565 *9* [proposed correction] > 556 8 565 12 [line in errata 3] > Problem: 556-8 is in section 15.4.8, not 15.4.7. > In the proposed correction, the line numbers are > those on which the text to be deleted begins. Dennis is correct here. However, I don't feel comfortable with the amount of text that is removed here. I would feel more comfortable if we just remove the reference(s). Actually the section references CSS3 two times. In the previous errata we said "Delete normative reference to working draft of CSS3." Which of the two is the normative reference? The 2nd one? If so, wouldn't it be sufficient to just remove the second reference, that is, the "See ยง9.2 of [CSS3Text] for details.". > > 15.27.31 655 12 *667* 10 > [missed correction. It is made on the next > 15.27.31 item] Page 667 seems to be correct. > > 15.28.4 656 *32* 668 31 > [656 has one more line at the top than 668] I did not check the line number, but I just noticed (indeed very late) that the resolution seems not to be correct. Actually 15.28.4 should in fact have been a new section on the 2nd level with 15.28.5 and 15.28.6 as subsection. But renumbering 15.28.4 to 15.29 changes the numbering of subsequent sections, too. I therefore suggest we replace "this section" with "15.28.5 and 15.28.6". > > *15.31.3* 663 21 675 37 [typos "15.13.3" but > *15.31.3* 663 34 676 5 in correct place] > [I can't believe the number of times I looked > at this page and didn't see that.] 15.31.3 seems to be correct. > > 17.5 686 18 699 17 > I just noticed that the new text has the > phrase "a schema (like http:)". The > correct term is "scheme" or even "URL > scheme" in accordance with [RFC2396] and > the scheme name does not include the ":", > so "a URL scheme (as in http:)" might > be more precise. (And it is "a URL" not > "an URL", also in accord with [RFC2396].) "Schema" in fact must read "scheme". That may be grammatically wrong, but it is the terminology used in the RFC. > > 17.6 686 38 699 36 [deleted by mistake?] > The correction instruction is: > Replace "thumbnails" with "Thumbnails". > [This is needed to complete the corrections > given for the preceding line of 17.6. This > could also be incorporated in that change.] Yes, this seems to be missing now. Best regards Michael > > > -----Original Message----- > From: patrick@durusau.net [mailto:patrick@durusau.net] > http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office/200809/msg00040.html > Sent: Tuesday, September 16, 2008 04:04 > To: office@lists.oasis-open.org > Subject: [office] Groups - ODF_1.0_Errata_draft_3 (ODF_1.0_Errata_draft_3.odt) uploaded > > > [ ... ] > > The document named ODF_1.0_Errata_draft_3 (ODF_1.0_Errata_draft_3.odt) has > been submitted by Patrick Durusau* to the OASIS Open Document Format for > Office Applications (OpenDocument) TC document repository. > > Document Description: > Draft errata for ODF 1.0 > > View Document Details: > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/document.php?document_id=29336 > > Download Document: > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/download.php/29336/ODF_1.0_Errata_draft_3.odt > > > [ ... ] > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that > generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: > https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php > -- Michael Brauer, Technical Architect Software Engineering StarOffice/OpenOffice.org Sun Microsystems GmbH Nagelsweg 55 D-20097 Hamburg, Germany michael.brauer@sun.com http://sun.com/staroffice +49 40 23646 500 http://blogs.sun.com/GullFOSS Sitz der Gesellschaft: Sun Microsystems GmbH, Sonnenallee 1, D-85551 Kirchheim-Heimstetten Amtsgericht Muenchen: HRB 161028 Geschaeftsfuehrer: Thomas Schroeder, Wolfgang Engels, Dr. Roland Boemer Vorsitzender des Aufsichtsrates: Martin Haering
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