During yesterday’s review with Duncan and Toby a number of suggestions were made, and today’s update attempts to address them. I’ve done the following
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Clarified the purpose of each example
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Cross referenced the features each example illustrates back to sections in the spec
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Added command execution sections for the consumers to the example 2 sequence diagram
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Expanded out the JSON message examples in Example 3 to normal nested structure
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Revised the image filenames so I can better keep track
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Adjusted statement to clarify Section 2 is entirely non-normative
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Eliminated ambiguous “must” instances from the non-normative Section 2
The entire revised document can be viewed at:
https://github.com/dlemire60/openc2-transf-mqtt/blob/working/transf-mqtt-v1.0.md
I’ve created a PR from my fork’s working branch to the OASIS working branch so the changes are easily seen:
https://github.com/oasis-tcs/openc2-transf-mqtt/pull/23
Please take a look.
Dave
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