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Subject: revision of my review comments of CS02


Added the document name reviewed 

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To PROMCODE TC,

I did one more review of CS02 and found the following problems that need fix. All of them are minor and of editorial nature.

T. Kamimura

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Document reviewed: 

OSLC PROMCODE Version 1.0. Part 2: Vocabulary  https://docs.oasis-open.org/oslc-promcode/promcode/v1.0/cs02/promcode-vocab.html

1. Introduction

change rdf:Propertyãto <code>rdf:Property</code> 

3.1.6  ManageItem -> ManagedItem

3.1.11 Project 

Change the last sentence

A Project resource also specifies the metric and the unit type of size of ScopeItem resources because they should be unique in a project.

To

A Project resource also specifies the metric and the unit of size of ScopeItem resources, each of which is unique in a project.

3.1.16 WorkItem 

Change the last sentence 

 It adds details to the description of the work that is described by a ScopeItem resource.

To:


 It defines the work to be performed to create a (part of) content described by a ScopeItem. 

3.1.18  ScopItem -> ScopeItem


3.1.32  ScopItem -> ScopeItem

3.1.38  

Change by producing in the sentence 

A WorkItem resource, such as reviewing the design, is required by producing an Artifact resource ...

To: for producing


3.1.42  Artificat -> Artifact

Section 4. Conformance  The two sentences are for constraints, not for vocabulary. They should be changed to:

PROMCODE servers MUST use the vocabulary terms defined here where required, and with the meanings defined here. 
PROMCODE servers MAY augment this vocabulary with additional classes, properties, and individuals.

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