reposting Yoshida-san's comments on CS02

Document reviewed:
OSLC PROMCODE Version 1.0. Part 1: Specification https://docs.oasis-open.org/oslc-promcode/promcode/v1.0/cs02/promcode-spec.html

1. Introduction
1.2 Goal and Solution
             [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]

3. Terminology
Project
             [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]
Project Management
             [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]

4. PROMCODE Domain Model Specification
4.1 Domain Model
4.1.1 ScopeItem
             finer grained ScopeItem entities -> finer-grained ScopeItem entities
             a coarse grained ScopeItemãentity -> a coarse-grained ScopeItem entity
             a set of finer grained ScopeItem entities -> a set of finer-grained ScopeItem entities

4.1.2 WorkItem
             a finer grained activity -> a finer-grained activity
A coarse grained WorkItem entity -> A coarse-grained WorkItem entity
finer grained WorkItem entities -> finer-grained WorkItem entities
a set of fine grained WorkItem entities -> a set of fine-grained WorkItem entities

4.1.3 Artifact
             finer grained Artifact entities -> finer-grained Artifact entities
A coarse grained Artifact entity -> A coarse-grained Artifact entity
finer grained Artifact entities -> finer-grained Artifact entities

4.1.6 ManagedItem
Attributes
source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1]   (put a blank character after String)

4.1.8 Report
Links
correspondsTo: Plan [0 .. 1]
             the Report entity is created to link to the new Plan entity -> a Report entity is created to link to the new Plan entity

4.1.11 ManagedItemCollection
Attributes
source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1]   (put a blank character after String)

4.1.14 Project
Attributes
source: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1]   (put a blank character after String)
Links
unitOfScopeItemSize: Unit[0 .. 1] -> unitOfScopeItemSize: Unit [0 .. 1]   (put a blank character after Unit)

4.2.2 Applying Quality Management
Table 2 Example of Quality Management Table
Line of Code -> Lines of Code

Artifact, and Measure -> Artifact, Measure, and Measurement

Appendix C. References
C.2 Informative references
[PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]
<a href=""http://www.pmi.org" class="">http://www.pmi.org/"> -> <a href=""https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok" class="">https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/">
A Guide to Project Management Body of Knowledge, 5th ed. -> A Guide to the Project Management Body of Knowledge
<a href=""http://www.pmi.org" class="">http://www.pmi.org/"> -> <a href=""https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok" class="">https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/">
http://www.pmi.org/  -> https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/

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