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Subject: Re: [pbd-se] Request for review comments and edits on PbD-SE Working Draft 04 by Friday June 13th

Hi Frank:

It is not a hard and fast fixed time - rather a hoped-for one. For example,  Sander had indicated that he intends to do comments and suggested edits for section 4 this weekend, and we're hoping to also get Stuart's edits by Monday.

Could you do detailed Comments and edits for Section 3 and share them as a first task? If you can find time, also section 4? We are working through your previous feedback in the meantime.

Could we also ask your visual modelling expert colleague who recently joined the TC to do a review of section 5 in the next few days ? We'll address the common voice eventually. 

Many thanks,

Sent from my iPhone

On Jun 13, 2014, at 12:35 AM, <frank.dawson@nokia.com> wrote:

This insufficient time to provide the review comments. Many organizations require 5 days or more to solicit internal review.

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From: ext Gershon Janssen
Sent: ‎6/‎12/‎2014 23:50
To: pbd-se@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [pbd-se] Request for review comments and edits on PbD-SE Working Draft 04 by Friday June 13th

Dear PbD-SE members,
At today’s meeting, we agreed upon a process for input on the latest version of the Working Draft (see attached) to prepare for next week’s meeting on June 18 (1:30 – 3:00 p.m. EDT). IPC staff volunteered to receive TC member edits, create a chart that will outline suggested changes / solutions from members, and endeavor to get this chart out prior to the meeting.  Time permitting and depending on the issues raised, every effort will be made to resolve some of these through the TC’s mail list prior to the next meeting.
Please send your suggested edits (track changes to the draft attached) preferably to the PbD-SE list (pbd-se@lists.oasis-open.org) or to michelle.chibba@ipc.on.ca  and fred.carter@ipc.on.ca by this Friday, June 13th.
Many thanks for your contributions.
On behalf of our Co-chairs, Commissioner Ann Cavoukian and Dr. Dawn Jutla,

Gershon Janssen
Secretary OASIS PbD-SE TC

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