Review of working draft 04 rev. 2

[Sander Fieten <sander@fieten-it.com>]

Hi all,

attached working draft 04 of the PbD-se specification with my review comments and edits. I only had time to have a look at chapters 1, 2 and 4. 

As mentioned on the last call I think it is better to move chapter 5 to an appendix or a separate document (for example a Committee Note) as it contains only non normative material. 

Regards
Sander

Attachment: pbd-se-v1 0-wd04R2.docx
Description: pbd-se-v1 0-wd04R2.docx

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Sander Fieten                        FIETEN IT
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