Here are some comments on Draft 8:
2.1.3.1 – I would like to change the title from “Schema” to “Provisioning Schema”. Also everywhere we talk about the schema for a target, we should use the term “Target Provisioning Schema” or “Provisioning Schema” as appropriate. This will help alleviate the problem that the term schema is used for so many purposes.
2.1.3.3. – The title should be “Capabilities”.
3.1.3 – There seem to be two blank images in this section (at least in my copy).
3.1.3.1 –Error in title, should be “Execution Mode Attribute”
3.1.3.2 – We should spell out “asynchronous” except when refering to an XML element or attribute
3.2.3 – Caution: PSOIdentifier is mutable should be: Caution: PSO Identifier is mutable and Recommend immutable PSOIdentifier should be Recommend immutable PSO Identifier.
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