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Subject: RE: #383: Yekaterina's feedback
Perfect, thanks! k From: sarif@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:sarif@lists.oasis-open.org]
On Behalf Of Larry Golding (Myriad Consulting Inc) Thanks! Fixed
typo. Fixed most font size issues; a few were intentional (for example, to fit something on a single line). From: Yekaterina O'Neil <katrina@microfocus.com>
A couple of more pieces of minor (except for highlighted) feedback: p.24, section 2.4, first example uses font size, 9, second – font size 10 p.28, section 3.4.4, first example uses font size 8, second – font size 9 p. 38, section 3.10.4, “§3.1of the standard” – missing space before “of” p. 76, section 3.20.2, first and third example use font size 9, second – font size 10 p.94, section 3.25.7, “downloadUri” should be substituted with “informationUri” p.105, section 3.26.16, example uses fonts 9 and 10 together p.157, section 3.48.2, example uses font size 8 p.186, section F7, examples use font size 8 p.188-190, section H, examples use font size 8 p.193-205, section J, examples use font size 8 k From: Larry Golding (Myriad Consulting Inc) [mailto:v-lgold@microsoft.com]
Issue #390 is now “Make certain invocation and versionControlDetails properties redactable”. From: sarif@lists.oasis-open.org <sarif@lists.oasis-open.org>
On Behalf Of Larry Golding (Myriad Consulting Inc) Yekaterina: Thanks for such a thorough reading. I addressed the bulk of your issues (the editorial changes) in a single change draft: I merged it into the provisional draft and closed
the issue. My point-by-point responses are in this
issue comment. I opened issues to track your substantive feedback:
Thanks, Larry |
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