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Subject: Re: [sca-assembly] Review comments of sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc
- From: Mike Edwards <mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com>
- To: "OASIS Assembly" <sca-assembly@lists.oasis-open.org>
- Date: Mon, 2 Mar 2009 10:22:34 +0000
Vamsi,
Fixed in the latest level (CD03 draft).
Yours, Mike.
Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
IBM Hursley Park, Mail Point 146, Winchester, SO21 2JN, Great Britain.
Phone & FAX: +44-1962-818014 Mobile: +44-7802-467431
Email: mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com
From:
| C Vamsi <vamsic007@in.ibm.com>
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| sca-assembly@lists.oasis-open.org
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Date:
| 17/02/2009 15:05
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Subject:
| [sca-assembly] Review comments of sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc |
In my last set of comments, I have included some general
comments on the
usage of @ when referring to attributes, usage of "e.g." and
"i.e.". I did
not point to specific line numbers that need attention. Here are
some
review comments on sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc to take care of
these:
Missing @ when referring to attributes:
Line 361: Two occurrences of "target attribute" to be replaced
with
"@target attribute"
Line 726: @requires attribute
Line 798: @requires attribute
Line 955: @value attribute
Line 1014: @source attribute
Line 1016: @source attribute
Line 1024: @file attribute
Line 1027: @source attribute
Line 1028: @file attribute
Line 1036: @type attribute
Line 1037: @element attribute
Line 1217: @targetNamespace attribute
Line 1300: @promote attribute
Line 1439: @multiplicity attribute
Line 1458: @wiredByImpl attribute
Line 1461-62: @wiredByImpl attribute
Line 1509: @uri attribute
Line 1587: @mustSupply attribute
Line 1661: @source attribute
Line 1663: @source attribute
Line 1698: @source attribute
Line 1727-28: @target attribute
Line 1884-85: Three occurrences of @autowire attribute
Line 1890: @autowire attribute
Line 2121: @targetNamespace, @name, @constrainingType, and @local
Line 2126: @autowire
Line 2128: @requires and @policySet
Line 2318: @constrainingType attribute
Line 2356: @targetNamespace attribute
Line 2370: "@constrainingType" attribute -- remove quotes(??)
Line 2379: @constrainingType attribute
Line 2501: @callbackInterface attribute
Line 2627: @callback attribute
Line 2725: @uri attribute
Line 2726: replace "URI attribute" with "@uri attribute"
Line 2731: @uri attribute
Line 2733: replace "URI attribute" with "@uri attribute"
Line 2735: @name attribute
Line 2834: "@uri" attribute -- remove quotes(??)
Line 3448: @wsdlLocation and @schemaLocation attributes
Line 3618: @location attribute
Line 3676: @location attribute
Appendix C:
[ASM60004] - @promote attribute
[ASM60011] - @multiplicity attribute
[ASM60036] - @wiredByImpl attribute - two occurrences
[ASM90001] - @uri attribute - lower case
##################
Occurrences of "eg ": 83, 342, 822, 1599, 3459, 3722, 3769, 4705,
[ASM12011],
Occurrences of "eg.": 86, 1803, 2145, 2147, 3472, 3751
Occurrences of "e.g.": 1808, 2559, 2721, 2968, 3571, 3588, 3653,
3701
Occurrences of "i.e.": 850, 1080, 1314, 1441, 1471, 2838, 2846,
2847, 3395,
3496, 3686, 3780, [ASM50011], [ASM60005], [ASM60011], [ASM60012],
[ASM12023],
##################
Line 409: "a @type" instead of "an @type"
Line 606: "a file" instead of "an file"
Line 1027: Remove comma after "precedence". replace "then"
with "than"
Line 2763: @URI or @uri ?
Line 2823: @URI or @uri ?
[ASM40010] - "a @type" instead of "an @type"
[ASM90003] - @URI or @uri ?
++Vamsi
Apache Tuscany Committer http://tuscany.apache.org
Apache Geronimo Committer and Member of PMC http://geronimo.apache.org
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