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Subject: Re: [sca-assembly] Review comments of sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc



Vamsi,

Fixed in the latest level (CD03 draft).

Yours,  Mike.

Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
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From: C Vamsi <vamsic007@in.ibm.com>
To: sca-assembly@lists.oasis-open.org
Date: 17/02/2009 15:05
Subject: [sca-assembly] Review comments of sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc





In my last set of comments, I have included some general comments on the
usage of @ when referring to attributes, usage of "e.g." and "i.e.". I did
not point to specific line numbers that need attention.  Here are some
review comments on sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc to take care of
these:

Missing @ when referring to attributes:

Line 361: Two occurrences of "target attribute" to be replaced with
"@target attribute"
Line 726: @requires attribute
Line 798: @requires attribute
Line 955: @value attribute
Line 1014: @source attribute
Line 1016: @source attribute
Line 1024: @file attribute
Line 1027: @source attribute
Line 1028: @file attribute
Line 1036: @type attribute
Line 1037: @element attribute
Line 1217: @targetNamespace attribute
Line 1300: @promote attribute
Line 1439: @multiplicity attribute
Line 1458: @wiredByImpl attribute
Line 1461-62: @wiredByImpl attribute
Line 1509: @uri attribute
Line 1587: @mustSupply attribute
Line 1661: @source attribute
Line 1663: @source attribute
Line 1698: @source attribute
Line 1727-28: @target attribute
Line 1884-85: Three occurrences of @autowire attribute
Line 1890: @autowire attribute
Line 2121: @targetNamespace, @name, @constrainingType, and @local
Line 2126: @autowire
Line 2128: @requires and @policySet
Line 2318: @constrainingType attribute
Line 2356: @targetNamespace attribute
Line 2370: "@constrainingType" attribute -- remove quotes(??)
Line 2379: @constrainingType attribute
Line 2501: @callbackInterface attribute
Line 2627: @callback attribute
Line 2725: @uri attribute
Line 2726: replace "URI attribute" with "@uri attribute"
Line 2731: @uri attribute
Line 2733: replace "URI attribute" with "@uri attribute"
Line 2735: @name attribute
Line 2834: "@uri" attribute -- remove quotes(??)
Line 3448: @wsdlLocation and @schemaLocation attributes
Line 3618: @location attribute
Line 3676: @location attribute

Appendix C:

[ASM60004] - @promote attribute


[ASM60011] - @multiplicity attribute


[ASM60036] - @wiredByImpl attribute - two occurrences


[ASM90001] - @uri attribute - lower case

##################

Occurrences of "eg ": 83, 342, 822, 1599, 3459, 3722, 3769, 4705,
[ASM12011],


Occurrences of "eg.": 86, 1803, 2145, 2147, 3472, 3751


Occurrences of "e.g.": 1808, 2559, 2721, 2968, 3571, 3588, 3653, 3701


Occurrences of "i.e.": 850, 1080, 1314, 1441, 1471, 2838, 2846, 2847, 3395,
3496, 3686, 3780,  [ASM50011], [ASM60005], [ASM60011], [ASM60012],
[ASM12023],

##################

Line 409: "a @type" instead of "an @type"

Line 606: "a file" instead of "an file"

Line 1027: Remove comma after "precedence".  replace "then" with "than"

Line 2763: @URI or @uri ?

Line 2823: @URI or @uri ?


[ASM40010] - "a @type" instead of "an @type"


[ASM90003] - @URI or @uri ?




++Vamsi
Apache Tuscany Committer  
http://tuscany.apache.org
Apache Geronimo Committer and Member of PMC  
http://geronimo.apache.org


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