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Subject: Re: [sca-assembly] Some comments on sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev7.doc
- From: Mike Edwards <mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com>
- To: sca-assembly@lists.oasis-open.org
- Date: Thu, 5 Mar 2009 09:13:34 +0000
Vamsi,
Thanks for pointing out these items.
I've corrected the spelling mistake
in CD03.
For the document references that you
discuss, I'm happy with what's there since in all cases
there is a reference to a full description
of the document which is in section 1.2.
Perhaps of more concern is the lack
of consistency in the way those references are labelled -
some are numbers [10] and some are phrases
[SCA BPEL]. It would be good to have a single
consistent pattern and I think we decided
on words rather than numbers. I'm happy to leave this
for now and correct it at the end of
Public Review. It is purely editorial and I don't think there is
any likelihood of anyone referencing
the wrong document.
Yours, Mike.
Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
IBM Hursley Park, Mail Point 146, Winchester, SO21 2JN, Great Britain.
Phone & FAX: +44-1962-818014 Mobile: +44-7802-467431
Email: mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com
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| C Vamsi <vamsic007@in.ibm.com>
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| [sca-assembly] Some comments on sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev7.doc |
Some comments on sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev7.doc
Line 365: "a callback" instead of "al callback"
Should the references in the document to Normative References listed in
section 1.2 be spelled out exactly the way they are in section 1.2? For
example, in section 1.2 we have "[SCA-Java] SCA Java Component
Implementation Specification", but in the document we are using "[SCA-Java]
Java Component Implementation Specification" (see line 201). There
are
similar instances of references to other specs as well (see line 278).
Some
are listed below.
Line 201: the *SCA* Java Component Implementation Specification
Line 278: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification
Line 280: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification
Line 347: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification
Line 349: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification
Line 422: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification
Line 424: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification
Line 603: the *SCA* Java Component Implementation Specification
There are more such occurrences.
++Vamsi
Apache Tuscany Committer http://tuscany.apache.org
Apache Geronimo Committer and Member of PMC http://geronimo.apache.org
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