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Subject: Re: [sca-bindings] [Issue 2] Inlined proposal v5
Anish, Here are my comments on this version: 1. In section 5.1, first paragraph, change "see the Appendix E" to "see Appendix E". 2. In the text for BWS50005, remove ", as specified in BWS50003" from the end of the sentence. Reason: There is no longer a conformance statement BWS50003. 3. Change the title of section 5.2 to "SCA Web Services Callback Protocol with WS-MakeConnection". Reason: This section is no longer defining an additional protocol. It is explaining how the protocol already defined in section 5.1 ("SCA Web Services Callback Protocol") can be composed with the WS-MakeConnection specification. 4. In section 5.3, second sentence, change "...requirements for implementing SCA Web Services Callback Protocol (see SCA Web Services Callback Protocol), ..." to "...requirements for implementing SCA Web Services Callback Protocol, ...". Reason: The parenthetical clause is repetitious and conveys no useful information. 5. In section 5.3.1, last sentence, change "requirements on forward request message" to "requirements on the forward request message". 6. In section 5.3.2, last sentence, change "specifies that WSCallback protocol is used" to "specifies that SCA Web Services Callback Protocol is used". 7. In section 6.2, replace numbered item 3 by the following: 3. The implementation MAY support the SCA Web Services Callback Protocol in conjunction with WS-MakeConnection. If it does, it MUST comply with all statements in Appendix B: Conformance Items for the SCA Web Services Callback Protocol and it MUST comply with the requirements of WS-MakeConnection. Reason: See comment 3 above. Simon Anish Karmarkar wrote: > Attached. > > This proposal consists of taking the inlined proposal v4 produced by > MikeE [1] and applying it to CD02 rev4. On top of that I have made the > following changes (based on the last call where we discussed v4): > 1) Included a pointer to the appendix examples from section 5.2 > 2) Missing 2119 statement tags are added. > 3) Fixed cross-references and 2119 stmt highlighing. > 4) Deleted all the MAY statements that were unnecessary. > 5) Replaced lowercase 2119 keywords with appropriate non-keyword > substitutes > 6) Made the protocol composable with WS-MC without introducing > additional conformance points. > > -Anish > -- > > [1] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-bindings/200905/msg00098.html > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that > generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: > https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php
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