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Subject: Re: [sca-bindings] [Issue 2] Inlined proposal v5
Simon Nash wrote: > Anish, > Here are my comments on this version: > > 1. In section 5.1, first paragraph, change "see the Appendix E" > to "see Appendix E". > Fixed in v6, which I will send shortly. > 2. In the text for BWS50005, remove ", as specified in BWS50003" > from the end of the sentence. Reason: There is no longer a > conformance statement BWS50003. > Fixed in v6. > 3. Change the title of section 5.2 to "SCA Web Services Callback > Protocol with WS-MakeConnection". Reason: This section is no longer > defining an additional protocol. It is explaining how the protocol > already defined in section 5.1 ("SCA Web Services Callback Protocol") > can be composed with the WS-MakeConnection specification. > Fixed in v6. > 4. In section 5.3, second sentence, change "...requirements for > implementing SCA Web Services Callback Protocol (see SCA Web Services > Callback Protocol), ..." to "...requirements for implementing SCA Web > Services Callback Protocol, ...". Reason: The parenthetical clause > is repetitious and conveys no useful information. > Fixed in v6. > 5. In section 5.3.1, last sentence, change "requirements on forward > request message" to "requirements on the forward request message". > Fixed in v6. > 6. In section 5.3.2, last sentence, change "specifies that WSCallback > protocol is used" to "specifies that SCA Web Services Callback > Protocol is used". > Fixed in v6. > 7. In section 6.2, replace numbered item 3 by the following: > 3. The implementation MAY support the SCA Web Services Callback > Protocol > in conjunction with WS-MakeConnection. If it does, it MUST > comply with > all statements in Appendix B: Conformance Items for the SCA Web > Services > Callback Protocol and it MUST comply with the requirements of > WS-MakeConnection. > Reason: See comment 3 above. > Fixed in v6. > Simon > > Anish Karmarkar wrote: >> Attached. >> >> This proposal consists of taking the inlined proposal v4 produced by >> MikeE [1] and applying it to CD02 rev4. On top of that I have made the >> following changes (based on the last call where we discussed v4): >> 1) Included a pointer to the appendix examples from section 5.2 >> 2) Missing 2119 statement tags are added. >> 3) Fixed cross-references and 2119 stmt highlighing. >> 4) Deleted all the MAY statements that were unnecessary. >> 5) Replaced lowercase 2119 keywords with appropriate non-keyword >> substitutes >> 6) Made the protocol composable with WS-MC without introducing >> additional conformance points. >> >> -Anish >> -- >> >> [1] >> http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-bindings/200905/msg00098.html >> >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that >> generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: >> https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php > >
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