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Subject: Re: [sca-j] SCA-J Working Draft 04 Review Comments


All of these fixed in WD05 except as noted below.

-Anish
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Mark Combellack wrote:
> Hi,
> 
>  
> 
> Having reviewed the changes in WD04 version of the SCA-J specifications, 
> I have the following comments:
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> 
> *Editorial issues that should be fixed before we publish a CD*
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> 
> Document Footer:
> 
> Document version is wrong – it has WD03 but this is WD04
> 
> Date is wrong – title page says 15 August 2008 but footer says 27 May 
> 2008-09-15
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> 
> PDF Document:
> 
> Page numbers are wrong in the footer. It has Page 1 of 1, Page 2 of 2, 
> etc. The Word document is correct.
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> *Minor Editorial issues that don’t need to be fixed before we publish a CD*
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> Page 7 – line 15
> 
> Extra space between end of sentence and full stop (.)
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> Page 17 – line 332
> 
> The code is coloured differently to the rest of the document. The 
> keywords public and boolean should be purple
> 
> Actually – this is a general problem throughout the specification. Some 
> code is coloured – other code is not.
> 

The general problem is not fixed.

>  
> 
> Page 17 – line 359
> 
> Text is using the wrong font size (10 point.) The rest of the document 
> uses 9 point font size.  This is not visible in the PDF version of the 
> specification but can be seen as the text being “more bold” in the Word 
> version.
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> Page 27 – line 780
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> Remove extra space between ServiceReference<B> and extends
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> Page 27 – line 795
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> Supplied is spelt wrongly – in the document it is spelt suppied
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> Page 39 – line 1349
> 
> Section is missing example of using @Property with a Constructor. It has 
> examples for the other two cases.
> 

Not done.

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> Page 40 – line 1408
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> Section is missing example of using @Reference with a Constructor. It 
> has examples for the other two cases.
> 

Not done.

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> Page 60 – lines 2235 to 2260
> 
> Text is using the wrong font size (10 point.) The rest of the document 
> uses 9 point font size.  This is not visible in the PDF version of the 
> specification but can be seen as the text being “more bold” in the Word 
> version.
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> 
> *QUESTIONS*
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> 
> I thought we agreed that we would update the style of the references 
> from [1] to [RFC2119]? Or was this for the Assembly specification?
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>  

Can't remember either, so not fixed.

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> Thanks,
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>  
> 
> Mark
> 
> Mark Combellack| Software Developer| Avaya | Eastern Business Park | St. 
> Mellons | Cardiff | CF3 5EA | Voice: +44 (0) 29 2081 7624 | 
> mcombellack@avaya.com <mailto:|mcombellack@avaya.com>
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