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Subject: Re: [sca-j] SCA-J Working Draft 04 Review Comments


Anish Karmarkar wrote:
> All of these fixed in WD05 except as noted below.
> 
> -Anish
> -- 
> 
> Mark Combellack wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>>  
>>
>> Having reviewed the changes in WD04 version of the SCA-J 
>> specifications, I have the following comments:
>>
>>  
>>
>>  
>>
>> *Editorial issues that should be fixed before we publish a CD*
>>
>>  
>>
>> Document Footer:
>>
>> Document version is wrong – it has WD03 but this is WD04
>>
>> Date is wrong – title page says 15 August 2008 but footer says 27 May 
>> 2008-09-15
>>
>>  
>>
>> PDF Document:
>>
>> Page numbers are wrong in the footer. It has Page 1 of 1, Page 2 of 2, 
>> etc. The Word document is correct.
>>
>>  
>>
>>  
>>
>>  
>>
>> *Minor Editorial issues that don’t need to be fixed before we publish 
>> a CD*
>>
>>  
>>
>> Page 7 – line 15
>>
>> Extra space between end of sentence and full stop (.)
>>
>>  
>>
>> Page 17 – line 332
>>
>> The code is coloured differently to the rest of the document. The 
>> keywords public and boolean should be purple
>>
>> Actually – this is a general problem throughout the specification. 
>> Some code is coloured – other code is not.
>>
> 
> The general problem is not fixed.
> 
>>  
>>
>> Page 17 – line 359
>>
>> Text is using the wrong font size (10 point.) The rest of the document 
>> uses 9 point font size.  This is not visible in the PDF version of the 
>> specification but can be seen as the text being “more bold” in the 
>> Word version.
>>
>>  
>>
>> Page 27 – line 780
>>
>> Remove extra space between ServiceReference<B> and extends
>>
>>  
>>
>> Page 27 – line 795
>>
>> Supplied is spelt wrongly – in the document it is spelt suppied
>>
>>  
>>
>> Page 39 – line 1349
>>
>> Section is missing example of using @Property with a Constructor. It 
>> has examples for the other two cases.
>>
> 
> Not done.
> 
>>  
>>
>> Page 40 – line 1408
>>
>> Section is missing example of using @Reference with a Constructor. It 
>> has examples for the other two cases.
>>
> 
> Not done.
> 
>>  
>>
>> Page 60 – lines 2235 to 2260
>>
>> Text is using the wrong font size (10 point.) The rest of the document 
>> uses 9 point font size.  This is not visible in the PDF version of the 
>> specification but can be seen as the text being “more bold” in the 
>> Word version.
>>
>>  
>>
>>  
>>
>> *QUESTIONS*
>>
>>  
>>
>> I thought we agreed that we would update the style of the references 
>> from [1] to [RFC2119]? Or was this for the Assembly specification?
>>
>>  
> 
> Can't remember either, so not fixed.
> 
I believe that this was discussed and agreed by this TC.  If there is
any doubt, let's address this on the call today.

   Simon
>>
>>  
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>>  
>>
>> Mark
>>
>> Mark Combellack| Software Developer| Avaya | Eastern Business Park | 
>> St. Mellons | Cardiff | CF3 5EA | Voice: +44 (0) 29 2081 7624 | 
>> mcombellack@avaya.com <mailto:|mcombellack@avaya.com>
>>
>>  
>>
>>  
>>
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