Copyediting status

["Eve L. Maler" <Eve.Maler@Sun.COM>]

Folks, please do try to give this a quick scan before our telecon.  In 
the main, the changes are merely editorial (and there's a bit more to do 
in that regard; I'll tackle this during last call), but just in case 
some bit of meaning got changed, we might as well catch it now.

We should be able to get a copyedited version of the Bindings spec out 
before tomorrow too.  Same story there.  I don't think I'll have time to 
do any others before tomorrow, though I *may* get to one more spec.

Based on the level of editing in these two samples, people should be 
thinking about whether they might feel comfortable voting in the telecon 
to "publish <each of the other specs> as a last-call working draft as 
amended with copyedits", meaning that the copyedits could happen after 
voting and before publication.  (If not, that's okay, but it would help 
the readability of our specs for a lot of folks who won't have seen them 
before.)

	Eve

scantor@internet2.edu wrote:

> The document sstc-saml-core-2.0-draft-16-diff.pdf has been submitted by Scott Cantor (scantor@internet2.edu) to the OASIS Security Services TC document repository.
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> Document Description:
> Copy-edited, with usage clarifications, and Consent values incorporated from ID-FF
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> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/security/download.php/7711/sstc-saml-core-2.0-draft-16-diff.pdf
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