[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (SOAEERP-10) PR08-e2 WhitePaper-cd03 Section: *EERP Technology*

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PR08-e2  WhitePaper-cd03 Section: *EERP Technology* 
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                 Key: SOAEERP-10
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-10
             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
          Issue Type: Sub-task
          Components: PR Comments
            Reporter: Paul Yang 
            Assignee: William Cox


    * I would like to commend you on the explanation given in
      SubSection: *Enablers for Optimization:*
    * Specifically, I am very pleased that "The focus of the SOA-EERP
      Technical Committee is on enablers for optimization and process
      improvement rather than on the complete EERP environment." This
      was an unspoken concern of mine early on, and it puts the entire
      complement of specifications into a sound perspective. (Note: I
      didn't intend to start with agreement and commendation. I must be
      slipping!")
    * In the second paragraph of SubSection: *Enablers for Optimization:
      *the parenthetical phrase "(how to represent cost, time, and
      cost)," is clumsy. Perhaps "(how to represent cost, time, and
      intended result)," might be better. (Note: the term we use in the
      SOA-RAF for intended "result" would be intended "Real World Effect.")
    * Suggestion for next to last paragraph of SubSection: *Status of
      Standards Process:* "These XML vocabulary specifications address
      the exchange of information that models the business
      characteristics of a service, permits assertions or queries
      related to the credibility of the service and its provider, and
      the establishment of agreements about the _*use of*_ business service. 

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