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Subject: RE: [soa-rm-editors] First pass
Here is the first part of my "second pass" based on the feedback from the proof-readers...I still have to work through the rest of some 20+ comments and changes proposed by Al Brown, and I'll send these as a second take tomorrow morning. Brain is getting addled at this late hour...Hopefully this provides a "restore point" at least. I've used track changes throughout to mark my changes in text, and comments where I think there is ambiguity or an open issue still. -----Original Message----- From: Peter F Brown [mailto:peter@justbrown.net] Sent: 11 November 2005 22:08 To: 'Francis McCabe' Cc: 'Matt MacKenzie' Subject: RE: [soa-rm-editors] First pass Thanks Frank, appreciated. I'll try to keep the proof-reading edits and comments (incorporating stuff from me, Prasanta, Al and Rebekah) as clear as possible, using track change function, so you can spot my stuff. I'll turn this around this evening and get it back to you an hour or so from now... Toodlepip Peter -----Original Message----- From: Francis McCabe [mailto:fgm@fla.fujitsu.com] Sent: 11 November 2005 18:49 To: peter@justbrown.net Subject: Re: [soa-rm-editors] First pass Peter I will send you a copy of the word file. But, you must understand that I am *also* editing it. Someone has to do the grungy work of reconciling edits (non-trivial in the case of certain other editors). Frank
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