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Subject: Fwd: [soa-rm-ra] Issues - Call for comments on Version 0.2
Jeff's issues have not been captured in the KAVI issues spread sheet so I am forwarding his previous message with "Issues" added to the subject line and I am also sending the message to Don Flinn, the issues manager. Danny --- "Jeffrey A. Estefan" <jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov> wrote: > From: "Jeffrey A. Estefan" > <jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov> > To: <soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org> > Date: Fri, 7 Sep 2007 11:10:19 -0700 > Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Re: [soa-rm] [soa-rm-ra] Call > for comments on Version 0.2 (Second time lucky?) > > Don and Frank, > > I started making a pass through Section 4 of the > Reference Architecture > working draft 0.2 and I realized it's still kind of > a mess so I gave up. I > saw a lot of draft text, particularly Section 4.2, > therefore, I'll wait > until others have had their say and updates made, > then I'll put my two cents > forth. It seems the focus of discussion on the SC > call these days has been > on the subject of Governance so once the dust > settles, we can return to the > topic of Realizing a SOA View. > > In the meantime, I've attached an issues list that > addresses some editorial > comments (very minor ones but important for > readability of the document) > that target the earlier sections with the caveat > that I did not focus much > attention on the language of Section 2 - > Requirements. This is something I > think we'll want to return to when we're closer to > wrapping up Section 5. > > Cheers... > > - Jeff E. > ____________________________________________________________________________________ Be a better Globetrotter. Get better travel answers from someone who knows. Yahoo! Answers - Check it out. http://answers.yahoo.com/dir/?link=list&sid=396545469
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