Re: FW: [soa-rm-ra] Update to Introduction

[Danny Thornton <danny_thornton2@yahoo.com>]

I would opt to remove the summary of the positioning and guidance on various specifications and leave that to the joint white paper, “Navigating the SOA Open Standards Landscape Around Architecture”.  My suggestions would be to remove from "The following is a summary ..." to the end of Section 1.1.5, Relationship to other SOA Open Standards.

Danny  

--- On Wed, 9/2/09, Thornton, Danny R (IS) <Danny.Thornton@ngc.com> wrote:

> From: Thornton, Danny R (IS) <Danny.Thornton@ngc.com>
> Subject: FW: [soa-rm-ra] Update to Introduction
> To: Danny_Thornton2@yahoo.com
> Date: Wednesday, September 2, 2009, 2:10 PM
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> From: Estefan, Jeff A
> (3100) 
> [mailto:jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov] 
> Sent: Wednesday, September 
> 02, 2009 10:50 AM
> To: 
> soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Update to 
> Introduction
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> RAF Editors, 
>    
> Attached is an updated Word doc
> containing only the updates 
> to the Introduction section reflecting the new sub-section
> that contains 
> reference to the joint white paper.  Note that I also
> changed occurrences 
> of “this Reference Architecture” to “this
> Reference Architecture 
> Foundation.”  I also updated the References
> section accordingly to contain 
> two new references that reflect the added content. 
> Note that I also 
> slightly reformatted the references (although not shown
> under track changes) to 
> read easier. 
>    
> I DO NOT want to muck with any gold
> copies and you will all 
> appreciate that.  I just underwent a horrible
> replenishment of my system 
> here at JPL and am still fighting my way through it. 
> No need to introduce 
> bugs into any of our working documents.  Suggest that
> Frank, you 
> incorporate this into the latest Gold copy. 
> Appreciate it. 
>    
> Cheers! 
>    
>  - Jeff 
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