Re: [soa-rm-ra] Section 3.1 Rewrite

[Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>]

Yes Michael,

I believe it should be read as "manifested."

Cheers,
Rex

mpoulin@usa.com wrote:
> Hi Rex,
>
> I see some difficulties in understanding the phrase: "the service 
> results meet participant needs in a Real World Effect". Before, I 
> understood that the Real World Effect was the result of the service 
> execution. That is, the Real World Effect itself may or may not meet 
> the participant needs. The Real World Effect may have much wider 
> effect than just the result returned to the participant as a response 
> to its request, yes, the Real World Effect does not exist on its own, IMO:
>
> <<for ensuring that the service results meet participant needs in a 
> Real World Effect>>
>
> In the Ken's edition: 
>
> <<for ensuring that the service results meet participant needs as 
> manifest in Real World Effects>>
>
> I guess the word 'manifest' should be read as 'manifested'. Am I correct?
>
> - Michael
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>
> To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org RA <soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org>
> Sent: Fri, Apr 30, 2010 2:13 am
> Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Section 3.1 Rewrite
>
> Hi Everyone, 
>  
> This is my first shot at rewriting Section 3.1. I have one main 
> consideration that I wasn't sure about. Does Section 3.1 refer only to 
> Subsections in 3.1, or does it also refer to Sections 3.2, 3.3, etc? I 
> dealt only with issues in Section 3.1-3.1.4.1. 
>  
> I deleted the example in the 3.1 because I thought it muddied rather 
> than clarified issues when what is needed is to set the stage for the 
> discussion of Actors, Action, Joint Action and Communication as Joint 
> Action. It tended to get the reader engaged with explanatory details 
> immediately and for me that was a distracting rather than clarifying. 
>  
> However, in rereading the whole section, I felt strongly that the 
> explanation of Service Action as a specific kind of Action and the 
> Counts-As logical equivalence needs an example that we all agree shows 
> these critical elements clearly. 
>  
> Cheers, 
> Rex 
>  
> -- Rex Brooks 
> President, CEO 
> Starbourne Communications Design 
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Rex Brooks
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