section 3 - latest draft comments

[Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org>]

Peter and Chris,

 

Suggested changes attached as track changes to excised section 3.  Most are editorial and we can discuss any that appear to be substantive.  Didn’t quite get through Architectural Implications, so I may have some later comments there.

 

Ken

 

---------------------------------------------------------------------------

Dr. Kenneth Laskey

MITRE Corporation, M/S H305              phone: 703-983-7934

7515 Colshire Drive                                    fax:        703-983-1379

McLean VA 22102-7508

 

Participation in a SOA Ecosystem view 20110408 (KJL).docx

smime.p7s