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Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] SOA RAF Security Section edits
Kevin, Attached is a markup of the security section. I made edits to substitute terms defined and used (hopefully) consistently in the rest of the document, and made some pure wordsmithing suggestions where I found the text awkward. I had more significant issues with the Identity Propagation section. I captured these in the comment to the section 5.2.5.1 heading and then suggested some wording changes in the remainder of the section. Happy processing. Ken --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dr. Kenneth Laskey MITRE Corporation, M/S H305 phone: 703-983-7934 7515 Colshire Drive fax: 703-983-1379 McLean VA 22102-7508 From: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Kevin Smith All, |
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