Re: [soa-rm-ra] SOA RAF Security Section edits

[Rex Brooks <rex.brooks@ncoic.org>]

I want to let you all know that I will be in and out of our meeting tomorrow due to NCOIC meetings being held in DC this week. So I can't be note taker and I probably won't have comments for the punch list. However, one thing we need to do is to get a Conformance Section written now that we have the Architectural Implications worked out for the most part.

I have attacched a sample Conformance Section from the specificaton I am editing. Please do not redistribute it, but feel free to paste it and change the text appropriately.

I will be on the call at least at the start tomorrow.

Cheers,
Rex

On 7/31/2012 3:21 PM, Ken Laskey wrote:

Kevin,

 

Attached is a markup of the security section.  I made edits to substitute terms defined and used (hopefully) consistently in the rest of the document, and made some pure wordsmithing suggestions where I found the text awkward.  I had more significant issues with the Identity Propagation section.  I captured these in the comment to the section 5.2.5.1 heading and then suggested some wording changes in the remainder of the section.

 

Happy processing.

 

Ken

 

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From: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Kevin Smith
Sent: Monday, July 30, 2012 4:13 PM
To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-rm-ra] SOA RAF Security Section edits

 

All,

Attached are my edits to the security section, taking a careful look at Michael's comments on the security section and based on our discussion at the last meeting.

Michael - take a look at this and let me know if this looks better..

Thanks,

Kevin

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