SOA-RAF punch list - Ken's

[Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org>]

Following are the items I found.

 

1.       Section 1.5 says “first mention ... use a bold font”. At end it says, “Where a more colloquial or informal meaning is intended, these words are used without special emphasis.”  After first use, how do we know when we mean the term in its formal sense?

2.       Are all references included in section 1.6? Are any references in section 1.6 no longer used?

3.       Figure 4: missing relationship between Delegate and Actor.

4.       Line 973: remove highlight

5.       Line 1858: remove highlight

6.       Figure 33 label mixed in with following text.

7.       Add Kevin Smith to Acknowledgements

8.       Was there decision to drop CFA completely or just move it to Appendix where it is?

9.       Revise RM-ODP text. Give Zoran heads up for rationale.

 

Anything else?

 

Ken

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