[issue:content] draft 07, sect2.1.3.1, line 331, Do discovery engines manipulate service descriptions?

["Chiusano Joseph" <chiusano_joseph@bah.com>]

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Line 331 states "However, the mechanisms to specify the service description should follow a standard, reference-able format that can accommodate the necessary variations and lend themselves to common processing tools (such as discovery engines) to manipulate the service description.". Do discovery engines manipulate service descriptions? Or do they just process them in order to match a request?

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Remove reference to discovery engines, and replace with references to tools that actually manipulate (and create) service descriptions, such as WSDL generators.

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Kind Regards,

Joseph Chiusano

Booz Allen Hamilton

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