Today's motion to approve Working Draft 02

Hi:

We are due to discuss and vote on approving TGF Primer Working Draft 02 as a formal Committee Note Draft.

There have been no substantial new comments or issues raised, but only a small number of editorial changes, that have been mentioned on the list.

To clarify therefore, I would like us to vote to approve v2 with the following changes:

Lines 241 and 275 – CSF diagram updated from ‘Do-Ability’ to ‘Achievable Delivery’;

Lines 432 and 1332 – change ‘Channel Management’ to ‘Channel Transformation’;

Line 1210 – remove line and comment regarding reference to IDM standards;

Line 1301 – change ‘Web 2.0 technologies’ to ‘technologies’;

Add names of editors;

Add names of TC members to list in Acknowledgements,

and that the duly modified draft be assigned v3 and submitted to TC Admin for approval…

Talk soon!

Regards,

Peter

Peter F Brown

Independent Consultant

Transforming our Relationships with Information Technologies

P.O. Box 49719, Los Angeles, CA 90049, USA

Tel: +1.310.694.2278

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