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Subject: RE: [tgf] OASIS TGF EXECUTIVE SUMMARY
I think the style of this is fine and it does the job for the intended audience. I still feel that the conformance clauses are too much at this level. I know we said that we would defer the decision and suggest that just a one line mention of each (without the explanatory text) might be an appropriate level at which to state them here.
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Attached is the first draft of the Exec Summary we discussed on last week's call. As we said this needs to be kept in line with the evolving v2.0 and it will be released soon after the publication of that document. It will become a Committee Note so we can change/update it relatively easily in the future.
We do not have to formally approve it just yet, so for now the questions are; is it fit for purpose, does it provide the necessary information for senior executives to understand the TGF, is it easy-to-read, is it too long, etc etc? Views on those sort of questions, and any suggested amendments, at this stage would be appreciated please.
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