RE: Editorial comments on TOSCA V2 draft

Thanks Paul,

The OASIS TC has just promoted the latest working draft of the TOSCA v2.0 specification to Committee Spec Draft 03. That document should be available on the OASIS Portal over the next couple of days. Based on that document, we will create a Working Draft 04 version. I will work with the TOSCA editors to try to address your comments in that version. I’ll let you know if any questions/issues come up with any of your comments.

Thanks again for you helpful feedback.

Chris

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Subject: [tosca-comment] Editorial comments on TOSCA V2 draft

I attach a word document containing a number of comments on the TOSCA v2 draft.

Some of these are pure editorial, e.g. spelling, wording and cut and paste error correction. Other comments fall into these themes:

YAML is the only language
Folded comment style and double quotes
Policy definition in general and period in particular
Node states
Normative types in examples
Environment variables and artefact arguments
Generalization of Get_node_type by allowing node type in node filters
Documentation of optional and required elements

Please feel free to create separate threads for any of these which you feel deserve greater attention.

Paul Jordan
OSS Specialist
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