Re: [ubl-payfin] updated payment means working draft doc

Hi Levine

Well done!! Iâve made some minor suggestions and comments (see attached), mainly editorial (use of RFC keywords and avoiding hanging paragraphs).

The only thing I stumbled upon (and sorry for not picking up on this before) is the section on payment via credit or debit card (2.3.3). In the opening text you say that âthe use of CardAccount under PaymentMandateâ is not currently supported and âwill be supported in future versionsâ, and then the example shows how this would hypothetically work in future versions of UBL. However, the committee note references UBL 2.2, and how something might be used or included in future versions is speculation at this point. But why do you want to have the CardAccount ASBIE inside a PaymentMandate in the first place? Couldnât it be directly inside the PaymentMeans as it is in UBL 2.2?

Could you update the date (frontpage, footer and revision history) to be the date where we will vote on the public review? So if we have it for this week then the date of the document would be Wednesday June 12.

/Kenneth

From: <ubl-payfin@lists.oasis-open.org> on behalf of Levine Naidoo <levine.naidoo@au1.ibm.com>
Date: Thursday, June 6, 2019 at 7:51 PM
To: "ubl-payfin@lists.oasis-open.org" <ubl-payfin@lists.oasis-open.org>
Subject: [ubl-payfin] updated payment means working draft doc

Hi All

kindly find attached

regards
Levine
(See attached file: UBL-Payment-v1.0-wd03.docx)

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