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Subject: RE: Comments on the draft document


Dear VEL TC members,

 

Iâve attached my comments on the complete VEL draft.

As agreed, I will present the comments during the next telco.

 

Best,

Damir

 

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Damir Nesic

PhD student/MSc projects coordinator

KTH Royal Institute of Technology

School of Industrial Engineering and Management

Machine Design/Mechatronics Division

BrinellvÃgen 83, SE-100 44 Stockholm, Sweden

Phone: +46-8-790 63 03, Mobile: +46-73-765 20 74

damirn@kth.se, www.kth.se

 

From: Damir Nesic
Sent: den 3 mars 2019 15:17
To: 'vel@lists.oasis-open.org' <vel@lists.oasis-open.org>
Subject: Comments on the draft document

 

Dear VEL TC memebers,

 

Iâve attached my comments on the first 20 pages of the draft document. Iâve also made some minor grammatical corrections.

Hopefully the comments will contribute to a good discussion tomorrow.

 

Best,

Damir

 

cid:image001.png@01D3AEF8.D99AF550

Damir Nesic

PhD student/MSc projects coordinator

KTH Royal Institute of Technology

School of Industrial Engineering and Management

Machine Design/Mechatronics Division

BrinellvÃgen 83, SE-100 44 Stockholm, Sweden

Phone: +46-8-790 63 03, Mobile: +46-73-765 20 74

damirn@kth.se, www.kth.se

 

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