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Subject: [PATCH v2] virtio-net: add missing articles for new hdr_len feature


And tweak a sentence slightly.

Reviewed-by: Stefan Hajnoczi <stefanha@redhat.com>
Signed-off-by: Cornelia Huck <cohuck@redhat.com>
---

v1->v2:
- add one more tweak [Stefan]

Note: I have not added definite articles to the feature description; _all_
features for virtio-net are described in that way, and we should add them
in one go should we decide to change that.

---
content.tex | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content.tex b/content.tex
index 5d3f865956aa..fc59eea95716 100644
--- a/content.tex
+++ b/content.tex
@@ -3100,8 +3100,8 @@ \subsubsection{Packet Transmission}\label{sec:Device Types / Network Device / De
   \begin{itemize}
   \item If the VIRTIO_NET_F_GUEST_HDRLEN feature has been negotiated,
     \field{hdr_len} indicates the header length that needs to be replicated
-    for each packet. It's a number of bytes from beginning of the packet
-    to beginning of the transport payload.
+    for each packet. It's the number of bytes from the beginning of the packet
+    to the beginning of the transport payload.
     Otherwise, if the VIRTIO_NET_F_GUEST_HDRLEN feature has not been negotiated,
     \field{hdr_len} is a hint to the device as to how much of the header
     needs to be kept to copy into each packet, usually set to the
@@ -3217,7 +3217,7 @@ \subsubsection{Packet Transmission}\label{sec:Device Types / Network Device / De
 
 	\begin{note}
 	Caution should be taken by the implementation so as to prevent
-	malicious driver from attacking the device by setting incorrect hdr_len.
+	a malicious driver from attacking the device by setting an incorrect hdr_len.
 	\end{note}
 
 \item If the VIRTIO_NET_F_GUEST_HDRLEN feature has not been negotiated,
-- 
2.21.0



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