Re: [virtio] [PATCH 09/17] charter: update on deliverables

["Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com>]

On Thu, Feb 04, 2021 at 12:16:10PM +0100, Cornelia Huck wrote:
> On Wed, 3 Feb 2021 17:45:53 -0500
> "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> wrote:
> 
> > we don't have multiple documents.
> > we expect to deliver specifications periodically.
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>
> > ---
> >  charter.html | 2 +-
> >  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/charter.html b/charter.html
> > index f3a34f3..11c6f70 100644
> > --- a/charter.html
> > +++ b/charter.html
> > @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
> >          </li>
> >        </ol>
> >        <p>
> > -        We anticipate deliverables (1) and (2) to be a single work, and (3) and (4) to be separate works. The projected delivery dates are 12 to 16 months after the first meeting.
> > +        The projected delivery dates for the specifications are each 12 to 16 months.
> 
> Maybe
> 
> "The projected delivery dates for the specifications are a deliverable
> every 12 to 16 months."
> 
> ?

Don't really like the repeated "delivery/deliverable". Do you prefer
every to each then?



> >        </p>
> >      </li>
> >      <li>