Re: [virtio] [PATCH 09/17] charter: update on deliverables

[Cornelia Huck <cohuck@redhat.com>]

On Fri, 5 Feb 2021 09:39:10 -0500
"Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> wrote:

> On Thu, Feb 04, 2021 at 12:16:10PM +0100, Cornelia Huck wrote:
> > On Wed, 3 Feb 2021 17:45:53 -0500
> > "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> wrote:
> >   
> > > we don't have multiple documents.
> > > we expect to deliver specifications periodically.
> > > 
> > > Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>
> > > ---
> > >  charter.html | 2 +-
> > >  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> > > 
> > > diff --git a/charter.html b/charter.html
> > > index f3a34f3..11c6f70 100644
> > > --- a/charter.html
> > > +++ b/charter.html
> > > @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
> > >          </li>
> > >        </ol>
> > >        <p>
> > > -        We anticipate deliverables (1) and (2) to be a single work, and (3) and (4) to be separate works. The projected delivery dates are 12 to 16 months after the first meeting.
> > > +        The projected delivery dates for the specifications are each 12 to 16 months.  
> > 
> > Maybe
> > 
> > "The projected delivery dates for the specifications are a deliverable
> > every 12 to 16 months."
> > 
> > ?  
> 
> Don't really like the repeated "delivery/deliverable". Do you prefer
> every to each then?

I slightly prefer "every"; but would like feedback from a native
speaker on that.

> 
> 
> 
> > >        </p>
> > >      </li>
> > >      <li>  
>