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Subject: Re: Editorial comments on VIRTIO v1.2 csd01
On Mon, May 09, 2022 at 04:40:53PM -0400, Paul Knight wrote: > Hi all, > > These comments are intended for the TC Editors, although I'm sending it to the > TC's email list for future reference. > > In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this > initial public review publication: > - broken link in Normative references: > -- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM > Publication SA22-7204, > http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any > future revisions > (This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for > this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer > available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at > 4.3.1.3 is still needed.) > This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft, > but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification. Cornelia, could you address this please? > Minor broken links in the "Revision History" - Appendix D > - https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/virtio-dev/201910/msg00057.html. (bad > link due to inclusion of the terminating period - second item dated 01 Sep 2020 > in Appendix D Revision history) - not a blocking issue > - https://lkml.org/lkml/2020/4/21/1020) (bad link due to including the final > right parenthesis in the hyperlink - item dated 01 Sep 2020 by Petre Eftime) - > not a blocking issue > - https://github.org/oasis-tcs/virtio-spec/issues/97 (bad link due to using > github.org instead of github.com - first item dated 30 Mar 2021 in Appendix D > Revision history) - not a blocking issue > > Appearance: > - (HTML only) To conform to OASIS style, this should use bold font in title and > headings from top through "Notices" > -- I noted that in the HTML file, these headings use class="aeb10-", but this > is not defined in the .css file. > -- For this publication, I defined it by inserting the line below into the .css > file (virtio-v1.2-csd01.css, at line 18), which fixed this issue: > --- .aeb10-{font-weight: bold;} > Please make this adjustment (or something with a similar effect) in your > publication process for the future. I guess we'll keep adding post-processing hacks for now ... we don't have any latex experts left in the tc to tackle this, do we? > > Best regards, > Paul > -- > Paul Knight....Document Process Analyst > OASIS...Setting the standard for open collaboration
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