Need Eyes on Terminology

With Mikes work on Schemas substantially complete, I am crawling through the specification aligning sections with the new terminology. Terms introduced throughout the document are now moving to the top.

Attached is the relevant 4 pages from the draft. Please review and make suggestions and corrections.

“It is difficult to get a man to understand something, when his salary depends upon his not understanding it” -- Upton Sinclair.

Toby Considine
TC9, Inc

OASIS Technical Advisory Board
TC Chair: oBIX & WS-Calendar

TC Editor: EMIX, EnergyInterop

U.S. National Inst. of Standards and Tech. Smart Grid Architecture Committee

Email: Toby.Considine@gmail.com
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